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Wednesday 1 June 2016

Addiction Poem

WALT: write a poem/rap.

Addiction, addiction, addiction, addiction.
It plays with your mind and makes it look fiction (yaaaaaaaa)
Inhaling glue, gas or petrol
Makes you go grumpy to the point you go mental (yaaaaaaa)
Put it down, it’s way too risky,
Don’t take your problems out on drinking some whiskey (yaaaaaaa)

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Ki ora Andrea

Your addiction poem is very good and the vocab you used was fantastic. I also made an addiction poem but it was a bit different. Did you get any ideas from the internet?

Unknown said...

Kia orana Andrea
"WOW!" Andrea, I really like your poem on addictions. People are addicted to alcohol, especially cigarettes. I like what you said on the 3rd verse about drinking whiskey because it is too risky. What would you do to stop people's addiction to alcohol?

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