I like your diamante poem. What I really like about it is that you have added in pictures, and your choices of verbs, nouns and adjectives. The ones that you have usen make your poem more interesting. Would you like to make more of these poems?
Hi Shanelle Yes! I really do enjoy creating diamante poems. This was the first time I'd ever written a poem like this.
Hi Petuana I got the idea of adding a picture from one of my classmates and I'm glad that you think my diamante poem is interesting. Yes! I would love to make more diamante poems.
Thanks for the friendly feedback Shanelle and Petuana.
I really adore the vocab you used and that you used pictures to show us what it looks like. I have also done a diamante poem before. i learnt it from miss parks. But i think I forgot how it goes, could you please tell me what to do?
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Kia Ora Andrea
I like the adjectives you have used. Adding the pictures was a nice touch to your diamante poem. Do you enjoy creating diamante poems?
Talofa Lava Andrea,
I like your diamante poem. What I really like about it is that you have added in pictures, and your choices of verbs, nouns and adjectives. The ones that you have usen make your poem more interesting. Would you like to make more of these poems?
Hi Shanelle
Yes! I really do enjoy creating diamante poems. This was the first time I'd ever written a poem like this.
Hi Petuana
I got the idea of adding a picture from one of my classmates and I'm glad that you think my diamante poem is interesting. Yes! I would love to make more diamante poems.
Thanks for the friendly feedback Shanelle and Petuana.
Kia orana Andrea
I really adore the vocab you used and that you used pictures to show us what it looks like. I have also done a diamante poem before. i learnt it from miss parks. But i think I forgot how it goes, could you please tell me what to do?
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