The life of Crime

WALT: write narrative with a focus on a powerful introduction.

“WHISH.” The sound of the heavy wind blowing through the night sky. 3 children in the back seat and Mum and dad in the front.

  “We're here!” yelled the kids. They hopped out and raced to the shopping mall door. As they entered, they noticed something strange...

3 men masked in black were pulling guns at peoples heads. They had tattoos and they were all coloured.  “GET DOWN!”  they shouted as they dragged the guns to their foreheads. “HHHHH” they inhaled deeply. The children were terrorised by the dead bodies they saw.

    “Guys, don’t panic. Just do as they say and you won’t get hurt.” dad chatted without confidence.

He reached his phone and tried to call 111 but there was no signal. He tried and tried but it never worked. Just as they thought it wasn’t going to get worse, the power went off and the sprinklers turned on.

  “AHHHHHH! SOMEONE HELP US!” people were praying for god to save them. Their hands were tied to their backs and blood was flowing everywhere.

When suddenly.....

    “WEEYOO WEEYOO WEEYOO!” the sound of police car sirens.

“Lower your weapons and let the hostages go.” ordered the policemen. “And why would we do that?”  “Because we know that you have no intent to shoot a whole squad that is surrounding you completely.” the policemen responded.

The hijackers came out unarmed and were arrested. They were sent to jail. Everybody went back home and spent the rest of their days with their families. The criminals were never seen again.